The way he is and the way I am not

Saturday, February 27, 2010 § 10

I see him everywhere
I want to see him more
The way he smiles
The way he carries himself proudly
The way he walks lazily with a hint of swagger
The way he talks
The way he cares about it all
Such detail I notice
And he notices nothing about me
Because I am invisible

Signing off,
Sophia

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§ 10 Response to “The way he is and the way I am not”

  • Hello Sophia, I have to say that I whole heartily agree with another comment that I read, in the fact that you are such a passionate writer and your poems exude an intensity and depth which is quite unique, and delightful to read!!!

    I guessed when you were growing up, you did not display this wonderful writing and composing ability; perhaps you had it inside you, but you were not sharing it with the world, and consequently, the world was really missing out on the beauty of reading each of your poems.

    For a father, it is an extraordinary experience to see the intellectual maturation of his children, and in my case in particular I feel overjoyed to realize that you as well as your siblings are progressing with giant steps.

    By the way, is this poem directed to a particular person, a friend or companion from school or someone else? The reason I am asking you this question is because in your poem you said "And he notices nothing about me", and it surprises me a lot that if someone does not notice you, so bubbly and a beautiful human being, that "he" must definitely be blind.

    Take care and until the next encounter.........

  • mom & son says:

    Hi, Ms. Poet!
    I missed you!
    So sorry for the late thank you but Thank you so much for the award you gave.
    Keep writing up, sweetie!
    I'm your number one fan!

    Have a great weekend!

  • Hi, I just stumbled onto your page &
    I love your blog! :)
    - Audrey Allure <3
    http://audreyallure.blogspot.com

  • Barry says:

    Sophia, this is so well done. I think we've all been in this situation.

    I truly love the way you write my dear. Even if it evokes feelings of heartache you still make me smile, because there is such a beautiful honesty and innocence to your writing.

    It's always a pleasure to read how you express yourself. :)

  • Barry says:

    I gave you an award on my blog. :)

  • kim says:

    been there too, sweetheart!
    XXX, Kim

  • Oohhh I have felt this way before! Sigh. Lovely, as always. xoxo

  • I know the feeling. Darling, you're writing is amazing. I love reading your posts. Don't ever stop :)

  • Suz says:

    As I said: love your writing...congrats!!!

    By the way, he ain't know what he's missing noticing then....

  • This is so captivating, thought-provoking, and mind-seducing. It is interesting how you used true feelings and thoughts to translate emotion into poetry, literature, writing.

    Como siempre, que bello, que seductor.

    Aquiles