On that day, I moved
That day cracked my world
Half my life was black
The other half was light gray
No part was white for my life was dark
Never more was there happiness
The light never shone through the clouds again
The tears trickled down my cheeks into the endless pit of despair
And yet with all this hopelessness, everything was just right
A voice deep down inside of me told me everything was alright
Today stands Hope on the highest mountain of my heart
Never shall we be separated again
* I wrote this in 8th grade. Please let me know what you think (honestly, even if you think it's bad!).
Signing off,
Sophia
I think it's pretty good. And I thought that before I knew you wrote in in eighth grade. :)
I hope you have a great weekend!
Wow Sophia, honestly I think this is good, especially considering when you wrote it.
And I love that picture. :)
it was as emotionally loaded as it can only be when you're in 8th grade. Wish I was again
I think you were talanted beyond your years. Very sweet.
I really like your writing!
the mix of emotions i love it!
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