Nouvelle vie, Pavement, and Coconut Body Wash
Saturday, January 16, 2010 § 5
I moved to the Dominican Republic
I had no idea what was in store
Sweltering heat, salty water
Stray dogs
Palm trees, broken asphalt
I smelled avocados and rice
Beans and meat
Unbelievable heat
After a long day of traveling
I took a shower with coconut body wash
So relaxing
Craving for an avocado salad, I ate a mango
Here's to new adventures-
Signing off,
Sophia
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Love the photo! Great poem. I kind of feel like I was there. :)
I agree with Jennifer Fabulous, the poem is incredibly descriptive of the Dominican Republic. The picture certainly brings back some good memories of the times I was there. It is a land of contrasts, and that makes it interesting. The blue sky and the vibrant green vegetation does provide a color feast for the eyes.
Now, I am craving an avocado salad, or perhaps a glass of cool passion fruit juice!!! wow, delicious!!!
it sounds like paradise to me. coconut body wash, avocado salad, mango – three of my favorite things!
XXX, Kim
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This is great reading, I'm glad I found your blog.
i really, like the photo of the DR, I hope to visit one day!!! This was a nice read. :) This is my first time reading you blog and I noticed that one of your favorite book series is: twilight!!! Mine too!! :)